My Family

WALT organise our ideas in our writing into basic paragraphs so that we are only talking about one thing or person at a time.

My Family
 In my family there are three people. Me my mum and my dad and one cat.

My dad is called Justin he is a mechanic and he works at Coopers Beach wof Centre.  He is 49 Years old his favourite drink is beer Heineken and steinlager and he is funny.

My mum is called Ilisa she is 45. She works in   Pukeko class she is very tall. She has golden brown hair.

 We have a cat  panda she is 15 years old she is a viral cat she killa lots of Birds.
 She is very old and I still love her but she’s a  little bit scared of us. She is very soft and cute.

Reflection:
What I want to get better is doing full stops in the right place. My other think was I want to get better at doing  the  names proply I want to get better at writing. The writer of this was Brock and edited by Brock Muller and Mrs Masters.  I LOVE MY FAMILY!!!!!!!!!!