Hey Brock, a great story that encompasses a value/moral - ka pai to mahi. I wonder if you might think about how you could adapt your introductory paragraph so it is more of a story rather than telling me the details. Perhaps it could be a description of you at the stadium with your whanau? You could include what you hear, see and feel? Keep up the excellent home learning during lockdown!
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Hey Brock, a great story that encompasses a value/moral - ka pai to mahi. I wonder if you might think about how you could adapt your introductory paragraph so it is more of a story rather than telling me the details. Perhaps it could be a description of you at the stadium with your whanau? You could include what you hear, see and feel? Keep up the excellent home learning during lockdown!
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